I'll assume you want a short creative piece titled "I Raft You, Big Sister Is a Witch" and write a new, polished vignette. If you meant something else, say so and I'll adjust.
"You're doing it wrong," she said, but her voice was soft, as if correcting a spider weaving its web. Her hair smoked in the sun. Around her wrist a ribbon—green, frayed—gleamed like a small spell. i raf you big sister is a witch new
"You always thought you were in charge," she said, and her eyes—earth and storm—were full of a tenderness that made my jaw unclench. "You built your life like a fortress. Do you remember when you forbade me from climbing the attic, said I'd break something fragile?" I'll assume you want a short creative piece